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Tenar-Elfarran 06/29/2009. chapter 12
So many things I can not write. And it is to read two chapters in a row, these two chapters in a row. There were times I was so shocked that I was tempted to stop reading, could not now and did not know that pasaríay wo qu me; To their situation (just that). Now I under Chapter 12, that was what left me stunned and read everything so suddenly ... But Naruto did save the day, I appreciate so much in this fic to understand so well Sasuke, and Sasuke could not be more cryptic and hard head, sometimes it makes me hate him more in the manga, and I can not read it without getting angry with Kishimoto for everything he does, finally, the review is for you and not for every manga Kishimoto who frustrates me. Sai
me of laughter, with cream and flavored condom asking Sakura if transvestite, as I laughed, poor Sakura, he meets with each individual xD. Do not you go to do with Gaara and Naruto, but I'm dying to see Sasuke jealous, is something that I hope to read about and do not post it eons later. By the way, another thing that was killing me was the human that was protecting Naruto Sasuke possibly did not do the most appropriate nor subtle, but I loved, thankfully behind Naruto could see so many groceries and managed ; prevent Sasuke committed another of his stupid revenge or homicidal ideas, that guy every day needs more than Naruto. Frankly I'm tired, this morning I had an exam that I studied a lot, I submitted an assignment (I put on wristirginidad) Sai as always in his line perverted, that guy does not change, poor Sakura does not know which has fallen on him xD But it twisted, poor Sasuke that he has enough with his own and about his father who now also want to see Gaara suffer from jealousy (yeah, I'm looking forward to) he needs to take some of his own medicine, you realize what gets Naruto to not be completely matched . Women, is a heartless bastard for many things, but in regard to Naruto is not for pleasure, Ella tries to protect his way, really matters, though their ways of doing things are never the best. Do you doll dresses? mode bright eyes not on what hay pictures of that? xD I'll trade one of yours for one of mine cospleyada of sexy no jutsu naruto xDD Cuidate Tenar, and rest, that at this rate you will end up dead. I am happy to read you ^ _ *
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06/29/2009. chapter 12
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It's getting very good history and has kedado you great capital! toy as reading at 2 in the morning and dead of sleep, but x how interesting it was able to finish xDD! Many congratulations x this new update, __, and I needed to read SasuNaru k and nobody in my favortieshad updated xDD! It needed a bit of yaoi in my life *-* redialing thanks!
Yaps: D well wen chapter and thank goodness that "followed" so to speak together x O:! xq or had not cried, __, and I'm actually very sensitive xDD xq!
Saludines: D!! Bye Aoi
Answer: aoi Thanks, I really am glad you enjoyed this capi. Aissa but look who are twisted and you want to see the poor suffering from jealousy xDD Sasuke (yes, I too am one) the bastard deserves it for having suffered both Naruto echo, not daring to take the step to quit all for one as beautiful as him. But change his mind, Gaara has the solution to all that I have come xD! Apps, not anticipate events in the next tell something interesting about Sai and Sakura. Apps, because if I can see your time looking for fics. Besos! --- --- --- Envy
06/30/2009. chapter 12
Hum ... I was still hoping that Itachi actually still alive (still I have it, in fact, xD), and the first thing I thought when someone bumped Sakura was: ha! Itachi. ... No, xD, I've ridden in my head all by myself, xD.
Personally I have not been made dense and hard to follow everything on the card and, dammit, I understand that you took. Summarizing is crap, xD. I liked how you have ManeJado Sasuke in this chapter, trying to maintain control and finally decided to confront his father, worried about Naruto (which tender can be the bastard) and without abandoning the kind smugly: I can only everything. What has also stuck at its most naked, when he collapsed in the coche.No takes to return to take control of their actions, and although there is a time carried away by his feelings then controls it. And if really lucky that Naruto is there.
As Naruto ... no, perhaps expected to see a little more concerned about the missing Kiba? otherwise well, according to the same and very believable. And yes ... I really hope 'great reconciliation', xD. .. I think it is the longest review that I leave, will be the xD ...update soon ... is true that Sasuke-baka lacks a bit of jealousy towards Naruto, i was very cold in this chapter and tear me when I talk like Naruto, but did so to protect it I think it was very hard ... Naruko Well, I really hope you update soon ... Take care ... Cheers!
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Thank you for reading further. It is true that Sasuke has been very hard many times with Naruto, this time to protect and away from it, otherwise not able to open, not Naruto (remember what that is xD stubborn) But anyway still deserves a good dose of jealousy that they feel in their flesh what he feels at seeing Naruto with Sakura. I have already startedto write the next, to see if it takes too long to hang me. Saya kisses! --- --- --- Hik Zhen
06/30/2009. chapter 12
Woman!
Long time no hear from you and your wonderful updates ToT, oddly 2 days ago was re-reading I think capital is 8, I'm not sure where Sasuke gets drunk lol xD I know, ed mo fuck you with that, I'm always re-re-re-rereading xD I do not know, that you walk drunk and all that, I really like, is perhaps typical but anyway ... go to the point.
I'm at work but as I have nothing todo, as I read, I've done the day with your upgrade, than good. regard to everything that happened, because if I imagine that the villain of the story would be the father, although I must admit that if there was not much I had been thinking about it, because Naruto and Sasuke and their morreos had distracted me lol my attention was with them ...
The story is intense ..! Being able to do what these two, because it is certain that the police is not a good resource, and that goals that I feel very good Gaara, pa that between Sasuke jealous and know which side chewing Dx iguana and I think that applies here, but anyway, I hada desire to put Jejejjee xD What else? Then also tell you that I laughed a lot with the mini meeting that had Sakura and Sai, hahaha was so funny, really, from the moment he said "Sakura is the name of Women ..." And she turns to look as if not to show it, I grabbed a laugh, the good thing is that it is not my boss, if not, I had asked, that whoever tickles me lol ... more laughter and gave me to imagine touching the Bubi .. lol and it all being
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And many jumping on the forehead veins ... lol Anyway. I say that has mots more morreos in the following and many kisses and stuff, and jealousy and the way ... hahaha xD I always ask the same, you realize what I'm perverted? I think that affects me read you: P lol nah! do not blame you for something that I'm years ago lol but it's good that I do not think I was Dx and began to wander as a means for review before but I'll tell you now if I dismissal because the page is getting crazy, and nothing awant very very ... if my little review ... vv Well, I'm going, but first as always wish you the best, all is well, lots of kisses for you and a big hug, you know you kill me witheach chapter, but fortunately I qe I have many lives because I relive just to read what follows and not staying half-hahaha ... Byebye ~! kisses beautiful: D Answer: Hi
Zhen, and do not be drunk we like because they always say the truth? xDD And Sasuke is quite of few words never ceases to confess his feelings to the blonde, while drunk can say it was because of alcohol xD (made in Naruko theories) are not alone, me too have distracted me from time to time, even when the plot has nothing to do with them, my mind makes me think of some decent scenes of these two onand the kitchen table ... the iguana chews? xDD This is the first time I read a thing, but I think I understand the meaning, a good dose of jealousy for Sasuke realizes that Naruto is not going to spend your entire life there for him, if you want something Get it, but two bands can not continue playing.
Poor Sakura, do not know which has fallen over with Sai xD I like as a couple, I've always liked, and I start to shuffle the posivilidad that end up together in this fic. Everything will be ^ ^
Do not worry, I identify with you. I also want more morreos, overturns, fingers rubbing and usurpers no jutsu, and will, just be patient. Astions, the fair also dispatched to taste. Thanks, I really am glad that you liked me, and I started with the following and see if the muse with me this time and bring them on time. Besos linda!
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06/30/2009. chapter 12 Oh my sasu poor amid all that! and as always super cheated, but buenisimo k k naru has relied on this is strong enough to outrun not angry and not understanding it. Sakura What was great I laughed a lot, if transvestite k! That Sai is excellent, k is androgynous face, lol, k has no more bust and above it toco! hehe, and even kedo confusing, lol, I love it!. Animo sasu and forget Fugaku face directly, not very good idea that, better to get a true test is best and enough ... XD I love to TELL
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Poor Sakura, do not know which has fallen over with Sai xD I like as a couple, I've always liked, and I start to shuffle the posivilidad that end up together in this fic. Everything will be ^ ^
Do not worry, I identify with you. I also want more morreos, overturns, fingers rubbing and usurpers no jutsu, and will, just be patient. Astions, the fair also dispatched to taste. Thanks, I really am glad that you liked me, and I started with the following and see if the muse with me this time and bring them on time. Besos linda!
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Natusky
06/30/2009. chapter 12 Oh my sasu poor amid all that! and as always super cheated, but buenisimo k k naru has relied on this is strong enough to outrun not angry and not understanding it. Sakura What was great I laughed a lot, if transvestite k! That Sai is excellent, k is androgynous face, lol, k has no more bust and above it toco! hehe, and even kedo confusing, lol, I love it!. Animo sasu and forget Fugaku face directly, not very good idea that, better to get a true test is best and enough ... XD I love to TELL
k hope to become very very jealous, that would be great and continuing
Sayo!
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I think in any story we quiet the poor xD Sasuke always get into trouble and the worst of the worst frames, so to speak, is doomed to suffer xD (One day I will come to an ulcer) But while I have the blond next to him certain things make it easier to bear. Sai has no remedyand claims with all Ponson to throw it away (not hard right?)
Oh and extra bonus Gaara ademása see if I start throwing quoits Naruto against Sasuke, anger, jealousy? fit of jealousy? na I think that llegaríaa crime of passion will be interesting to see or for that matter read.
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not tell me it's your birthday ... Felicidadeeeeess! Although it does not have happened in a nice place, but they are things in life for which you must pass. And although I've had many gifts from across the pond you a big hug and thousands of kisses. And a lot of courage for your grandfather, he recovers soon! Sai will not change xD He is soindiscreet, that guy is hopeless. Sakura does not know yet which has fallen on him, but I have time to find out xD I think like you, I do not like the bashing, or she or any other character. She has no guilt of being the third wheel in this relationship, and of course deserves a vote of confidence and support. I like happy endings, and she'll make an exception, just give me time to develop and flourish
the plot ^ ^ Sasuke is still the same selfish interests, violent, and few words, but if it were not so , would be the bastard we hate, love Luck xD so who has the rubyor your side slowly guiding you on the right path of life, sometimes I think that Sasuke does not deserve someone like Naruto to her, but love is so, it lets you choose who you fall in love . Anyway, two of them complement each other well, it lacks the other one has it. No, I do not think that the thing came to crime between Sasuke and Gaara, but small reclaim their property disputes, Sasuke is going to come good dose of jealousy, to understand that Naruto is not feeling well being loved. That is going to give Sasuke the push you need to decide. Kisses king is always nice talking to you. Let's see if I see you on msn and talk more quietly. Take care handsome! CHTMLl chapter. I had my doubts about the plot and too much information that I had to tell, but if you understood everything the first time I stay quiet. Sasuke is a good thing to have someone beside him as the blond, then you see that things are not always solved with violence. They are a good influence on each other. Sai as always in his line perverted, that guy does not change (and why I love it xD) Kisses pretty ^ ^ I hope the next will follow like it. Cuidate!
Sayo!
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I think in any story we quiet the poor xD Sasuke always get into trouble and the worst of the worst frames, so to speak, is doomed to suffer xD (One day I will come to an ulcer) But while I have the blond next to him certain things make it easier to bear. Sai has no remedyand claims with all Ponson to throw it away (not hard right?)
Oh and extra bonus Gaara ademása see if I start throwing quoits Naruto against Sasuke, anger, jealousy? fit of jealousy? na I think that llegaríaa crime of passion will be interesting to see or for that matter read.
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not tell me it's your birthday ... Felicidadeeeeess! Although it does not have happened in a nice place, but they are things in life for which you must pass. And although I've had many gifts from across the pond you a big hug and thousands of kisses. And a lot of courage for your grandfather, he recovers soon! Sai will not change xD He is soindiscreet, that guy is hopeless. Sakura does not know yet which has fallen on him, but I have time to find out xD I think like you, I do not like the bashing, or she or any other character. She has no guilt of being the third wheel in this relationship, and of course deserves a vote of confidence and support. I like happy endings, and she'll make an exception, just give me time to develop and flourish
the plot ^ ^ Sasuke is still the same selfish interests, violent, and few words, but if it were not so , would be the bastard we hate, love Luck xD so who has the rubyor your side slowly guiding you on the right path of life, sometimes I think that Sasuke does not deserve someone like Naruto to her, but love is so, it lets you choose who you fall in love . Anyway, two of them complement each other well, it lacks the other one has it. No, I do not think that the thing came to crime between Sasuke and Gaara, but small reclaim their property disputes, Sasuke is going to come good dose of jealousy, to understand that Naruto is not feeling well being loved. That is going to give Sasuke the push you need to decide. Kisses king is always nice talking to you. Let's see if I see you on msn and talk more quietly. Take care handsome! CHTMLl chapter. I had my doubts about the plot and too much information that I had to tell, but if you understood everything the first time I stay quiet. Sasuke is a good thing to have someone beside him as the blond, then you see that things are not always solved with violence. They are a good influence on each other. Sai as always in his line perverted, that guy does not change (and why I love it xD) Kisses pretty ^ ^ I hope the next will follow like it. Cuidate!
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gozatela
07/01/2009. chapter 12
released a few secrets! I think I'll do like Sasuke, take a few days to "digest" jijijijiji
always thought that the Commission's letter Itachi wrote it, but apparently I'm wrong:) clear indeed that the Uchiha clan is bad jajajaja, is Here's a shame that Itachi does not kill them all! Because wrote that I find so bizarre between Sai and Sakura? cute, going to get jealous of Sasuke with Gaara! That to be worth reading! Take care and I hope you update soon. Luck!
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xD Of course, we all hard to digest so much information, I tried to summarize as best I could, for the next try dropping them to go slowly. That was the impression more of a reader, that the letter was from Itachi, but at first it was Naruto who seek to Shisui, Itachi was the name that was associated with the former's death, so that letter also had to be the first. But these are details that you miss (especially if the chapter contains risque scenes of those two guys, which is what you stay mostly xD) The meeting of Sai and Sakura is not circumstantial, I mean, that's the first contact of many others, and you can get angood fanfic you're my favorite writer and look forward to the continued ...
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But evil and twisted they are, we want to see Sasuke looking forward to experiencing and recarcomiendose of jealousy with the blond xD (me first ...) I need, neh?, If only to realize what Naruto gets to see another. It suits some of his own medicine. Thanks ^ ^ I really glad you like the story, and I started with the following, I hope the muse to help me bring it soon. Cuidate!
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Lyra
2009-07-02. chapter 12
Eh! q bn upgradedart, will come the day when he realizes all his mistakes and has to make that decision awaited. Besos Lyra, thanks for your review.
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2009-07-02. chapter 12 q bn cap itachi history could not be clearer jeje bno espeor your next cap ja-ne
xD Of course, we all hard to digest so much information, I tried to summarize as best I could, for the next try dropping them to go slowly. That was the impression more of a reader, that the letter was from Itachi, but at first it was Naruto who seek to Shisui, Itachi was the name that was associated with the former's death, so that letter also had to be the first. But these are details that you miss (especially if the chapter contains risque scenes of those two guys, which is what you stay mostly xD) The meeting of Sai and Sakura is not circumstantial, I mean, that's the first contact of many others, and you can get angood fanfic you're my favorite writer and look forward to the continued ...
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But evil and twisted they are, we want to see Sasuke looking forward to experiencing and recarcomiendose of jealousy with the blond xD (me first ...) I need, neh?, If only to realize what Naruto gets to see another. It suits some of his own medicine. Thanks ^ ^ I really glad you like the story, and I started with the following, I hope the muse to help me bring it soon. Cuidate!
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Lyra
2009-07-02. chapter 12
Eh! q bn upgradedart, will come the day when he realizes all his mistakes and has to make that decision awaited. Besos Lyra, thanks for your review.
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2009-07-02. chapter 12 q bn cap itachi history could not be clearer jeje bno espeor your next cap ja-ne
PDTA: ah! I forgot ... I love the idea of sasuke jealous hahhaha coat
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seems that we are all looking forward to seeing Sasuke angry and jealous (who would not, if he deserves for everything he has cast the poor of Naruto) It will not come a bit of bador the decisions you make regarding the development of history.
I think in the fiction of "The legacy of Naruto", when it seems that Sai is going to die, I read that comment that you write what you want to write, not what you asked and I like it that way because I believe that something truly beautiful, or at least, I enjoy a lot, is to read what the writer / author has planned to show and in fact, I'm sure you've noticed that I simply say I loved each of your work is that I do not like to speculate about what will happen because really, I enjoy reading very much what happens and if it is something that I hope, just say: I guessed! But sI do not usually be people who laugh when they see a funny scene on TV but I can not help it when I read all the comic that you show us.
Sincerely, Oyuki. Answer:
Oyuki
Hello, I wanted to have spoken to you before you get the chapter, to give me your impression, but for one thing and another I could not connect Internet for several days and when I decided to upload it was a little late. For the next I hope to talk to you soon.
Well, with that comment I made on the legacy did not mean to imply that I do not get influenced pbut more focused and thoughtful. Presented his views sought to clarify things between them to the point where he realized the strange behavior of his partner, anyone in his situation would leave aside the issue we are trying to interest another who unexpectedly becomes the principal. But that does not mean he has completely ruled out, and have time to retake it.
If I'm honest, and as I said earlier, I had thought of bringing Gaara, his seat would be occupied by another character, but at this point I thought, what the hell, Sasuke deserves punishment for behaving so fr &; Iacute; ay selfishly with Naruto. Not bad comes a good dose of jealousy, at least to understand the damage he does with his attitude to Naruto, and if continues like this, without identifying and focusing the relationship that binds the be missed. It is a subtle way of giving the little push you need to make decisions and responsavilidades on this issue. True, Naruto did not relish the idea of seeing Gaara, I hope the plot will convince you I have prepared.
Poor Sakura, do not know which have fallen into stumbling Sai. I confess that there are few straight couples that fully engages my attention, but this is one of them. Creectly to your email. xDD I always say that he placed candles to Saint perversion for her to shine my way of ninja, I do not know if it will work, but I try just in case, to see if it helps me with Memories. Sky kisses!
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Answer:
seems that we are all looking forward to seeing Sasuke angry and jealous (who would not, if he deserves for everything he has cast the poor of Naruto) It will not come a bit of bador the decisions you make regarding the development of history.
I think in the fiction of "The legacy of Naruto", when it seems that Sai is going to die, I read that comment that you write what you want to write, not what you asked and I like it that way because I believe that something truly beautiful, or at least, I enjoy a lot, is to read what the writer / author has planned to show and in fact, I'm sure you've noticed that I simply say I loved each of your work is that I do not like to speculate about what will happen because really, I enjoy reading very much what happens and if it is something that I hope, just say: I guessed! But sI do not usually be people who laugh when they see a funny scene on TV but I can not help it when I read all the comic that you show us.
Well, out of Chapter 12, I talk to you last time I was chatting with my friends Yaoi and stories and I commented something I love about your work and what we now accept the Yaoi is because, you , we always show a real love between them, for example, my friends like that do not accept the idea of a Naruto pregnant but I told them that fic I really liked that in this way, complementing their relationship: I have recommended it a lot and it is also really funny ... I hope; Poderte read it to express their views. Naruko
Ok, I say goodbye and I'm sorry to ask but how you answered my previous review ...? I could not see it = (and well, it said, because if I answered and I have not said anything about it, do not want to sound rude in some way to pretend that I have ignored your reply ^ _ ^ Cui ; date much, luck and courage to all the activities that make your life and wish you success and best of the best, you know I'll be waiting impatiently for 8 weeks and then ... I'm really considering adopting the Catholic religion and start praying for you also resume & eacute; n Memories is that ... I really liked this beautiful fic and it breaks my heart to know that is not finished XD Sincerely, Oyuki. Answer:
Oyuki
Hello, I wanted to have spoken to you before you get the chapter, to give me your impression, but for one thing and another I could not connect Internet for several days and when I decided to upload it was a little late. For the next I hope to talk to you soon.
Well, with that comment I made on the legacy did not mean to imply that I do not get influenced pbut more focused and thoughtful. Presented his views sought to clarify things between them to the point where he realized the strange behavior of his partner, anyone in his situation would leave aside the issue we are trying to interest another who unexpectedly becomes the principal. But that does not mean he has completely ruled out, and have time to retake it.
If I'm honest, and as I said earlier, I had thought of bringing Gaara, his seat would be occupied by another character, but at this point I thought, what the hell, Sasuke deserves punishment for behaving so fr &; Iacute; ay selfishly with Naruto. Not bad comes a good dose of jealousy, at least to understand the damage he does with his attitude to Naruto, and if continues like this, without identifying and focusing the relationship that binds the be missed. It is a subtle way of giving the little push you need to make decisions and responsavilidades on this issue. True, Naruto did not relish the idea of seeing Gaara, I hope the plot will convince you I have prepared.
Poor Sakura, do not know which have fallen into stumbling Sai. I confess that there are few straight couples that fully engages my attention, but this is one of them. Creectly to your email. xDD I always say that he placed candles to Saint perversion for her to shine my way of ninja, I do not know if it will work, but I try just in case, to see if it helps me with Memories. Sky kisses!
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konbawa ^ ^ apologies for having disappeared ... I wanted to let you really revs, but for one reason or another had no time, I read the last three caps to run ... TT and so if it is too much information, see & eacute, if I leave the previous time sorry, I digress ... I was going? ... clear ... Itachi-sama! TT ... was right where I thought things were going, so the manga expected you to take that course, but, but ... Itachi-sama! as we like him so much suffering and so wonderful that's it ... poor Sasuke, you could you be twisting (bad would do or not) for having faith in his wonderful onisama, which will take many many flowers and the head of his father as a sign of repentance! a minimum! do not know why but the little Uchiha not wake me or the child's maternal instinct (just nothing else), but no ... does not deserve to Naru-chan, what if I fail to target is to quien Gaara just kidding, because the truth is all I can think of to not have mercy and end this bad with Naruto so sorry, I'm far mdime because the red does not deserve it ... it, which I moved and do not charge per page but if I have a literature exam tomorrow and I have not opened the book XD cuidate
writes a lot and just as cute ^ ^
now how in the world is influnza contributes to the perversion (Prevention say) and gives the world a dose of vitamin C. .. more lemon onegai!
(Shii farewell with a bow)
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Apps, do not worry about the past comentarioa is normal with such a short time in newstra daily life for us not to read much less write. With pleasing to know that you follow the story I'm happy ^ ^ That is true both in the manga with the fics we are committed to making the poor suffer Itachi, what fault is it? I feel rather sorry, but the destination is almost always placed. Sasuke is one of the characters that you hate or love it unconditionally, it becomes stupid xD Everything is difficult with him, without enbargo Naruto loves everybody. It is rare not to love this character so kind and considerate with your friends. Well, not badly misguided you with your theory, it is clear that something happened between Gaara and Naruto, to see if the tramI have prepared for them like you. Kisses, thanks for your review and I hope that the review is going right! We do not hesitate
, vitamin C (lemonera) is one of the main things in this life xD --- --- ---
Aleli Hanasaki
03/07/2009. chapter 12 adore your fic. and do not worry to become very well the drafting of the death of Itachi. What if I can not stand it, I need to make two comments to! 1 - I am big fan of gaa / sai, but the scene where he appeared with sakura sai and the type of scene, I must say I laughed a lot, I assume you'll do something with them both = / so in a these and tell me a between gaara and sai that nothing had happened andso I'll stay with the desire and who never created! xD I mean haha.
2 - I know this is not a combo-fiction or fiction to secure orders that already have well-specified and formed the idea of the fic. but I can not help imagining a character that you get to the ball. and by that I mean kiba, if this is gone, does not necessarily have to be dead, kisas and can be captured somewhere or something, and keep him alive to get information about who sent him to investigate the uchiha family and thus reach naruto (well if the idea is planned within the idea) and SHINE! he must appear if it comes kiba! LO TO LOSE! I AM A BIGEYE! YOU MUST BE THINKING THAT MAKE ME MY OWN FIC!
