TMLXC
moon
18/05/2009. chapter 11 was super exciting chapter, which will be written in the letter, as I know, my curiosity is too big.
now that I finally opened the eyes naru decicion take over his relationship with Sasuke, please update soon, cuidate , we read ^ _ ^ Answer: not have to wait long to find content of the letter, the following will try to explain without too much the thing rolling. Shikamaru would say, is going to be a bit problematic to explain xD Since then, Naruto needed a good dose of realad, now see how it takes and what is your decision. Besos ^ ^ I'm glad you liked the capital, try to get back soon with more. Cuidate Moon.
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05/18/2009. chapter 11
wow shikamaru really made him open his eyes to naru now is the time when sasuke must decide whether to be with sakura with perfect stability or Naruto being happy really * tired sigh * I just hope Sasuke q q realize what could come to win and lose if you do not choose your next capital bn hope this was very bno
A. I think the dark will all these things in mind when choosing one or the other, but not only assess these concepts, but daring to turn his back on a lifetime and start a new one-handed front and behind, is not an easy decision. Thanks, I've begun to write the following to see if my muses perverse help me not get stuck too xD PS: I love your nick * __ * --- --- ---
ANPO 05/18/2009
. chapter 11
(wa, it was a serious XD) I hope you make them suffer too. Those two are not together is when ... crumble internally! And if you do at least do it when they are explosive! *.*! (Inner-spicy!)preferred, but I do not dislike. The blond is not an innocent boy who has not had a boyfriend in your life, choose a character, I saw Gaara as the most aproviado, by the close bond that unites them in the manga. Glad you have another vision of Sasuke, than the male punch. I find it very attractive and engaging aspect of uke, because it does not have to change your personality regardless of the position he holds in his bed. Everyone should continue to retain his personality, whatever the circumstances. And I try to do. Ains suffering is inevitable on both sides. Because in real life, perfect love does not exist. But yes, when things are settled and reached the recdams, as it should be. Otherwise even I get bored writing it xDD Besos, we read! --- --- ---
starlightnorain
18/05/2009. chapter 11
I counted the seconds waiting impatiently updated daily. Of all the surveys that I never imagined that I considered a friend of Naruto Shikamaru would perhaps have been better that than Sakura had to face the truth so drastically. Now, it seems that every time Sasuke gets narrower in the way of the elections while the truth is responsible for giving the slapping, I think that the famous carta Naruto had mentioned earlier of its findings is now found Sasuke, which would change the situation now judging by the last thing you put on Sasuke and his reaction to the contents of the famous letter .
Now, Naruto was already aware of the limitations of their relationship, but went on, of course all the love that influences both classically leaves us blind (temporarily) to what is happening around, and Shikamaru just as it is has come to give the tossed it to failure. As I've said in your previous review all or nothing, it is possible that if all of whether you get the crumbs while reminiscent of a secret feelingsage such people do exist and, worse, are the most abundant, with clear levels but there are plenty. Now picture this curious truth behind Jiraiya, Shikamaru the conciliator, Fugaku the wicked, the selfless Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto in the undecided middle of everything. That reminds me of good old novels. know, not if I felt the shortest chapter or ate it faster, which frankly I am more inclined for the latter. Of course always worth the wait well worth it, all I like that you're taking the time to detail everything in proper place, so I find a great balance at all. Although against allforecast as I said in line behind Shikamaru swore would be the catalyst for everything, and if it was it was in another sense, different than expected, but not bad, just that I have given a lesson that I can not trust what the actual plot of the story tells me, still giving surprises me chapter after chapter.
certainly could not avoid reading the consistent line which states the stormy and pleasurable pain which is suffered Sasuke, and that's one reason why I love it! This is because in previous comments, not only of this fic, I mentioned that I am unable to see Naruto as a Uke pussy, just towards Sasuke, but your my quErida girl doing magic and give everyone their place without denigrating their character and feature as characters. From my point of view I feel that these two intense nights together would be to find out who and where, of course at that point the idea that one subject to another is more than relegated. But as they've done so far I love that you make use of things there that really happen in life, a person suddenly comes into your life, it does get much on it in such wise that you do things you never thought , this one would do (your server for example, but I never ever thought I would "stuff" in school m & aaceacción Sasuke is clear that it contains nothing good, or maybe, depending how you look. But I think she will understand many of the actions of each character, and the evil intentions of others. In the following I will try to explain little by little without overloading.
Yes that's true, Naruto was already aware of the limitations of being a lover, and accepted. One of the drawbacks of being in love, you're not able to see things objectively and think before your heart than your head. But I could not keep pace with the crumbs, not fair for him to love a person who can not surrender completely. In the long run as it says Shikamaru, would suffer. And the more time went on, the worse would be the fall. Not only is Sasuke choose one of two ways, there are more things around to prevent him from making what he craves. And now with the letter worse. It is immoral for fun, let's say you hide behind that appearance with the intent to protect the people who matter. But away is not always the best way to protect. thought is what this whole thing, still have people like Fugaku, that subject their children at will, either for your interest rid of them with the firm idea that they are a burden to maintain (especially women) and it is despicable to what you can not fightr, only the person affected can whenever you want to fight. What's worse is that many go through the hoop so as not desonrar his family. But what the family chooses not right for a child's future? I will not end ever understand. That song annoys me because someone close to me has been, fortunately bowed to the whims of his father. Ahh no, this time I can say that the chapter was short, that exceed the word limit in the previous xD I try to find that balance, but if I'm honest sometimes I lose the north, and when I realize I've written something completely different to my initial thought. I've always said, the plotTMLXC No god, thank you for reading my follow, cheering and commenting on the chapters. You'll always be grateful because they spend part of your valuable time to write me a comment with your opinion comprehensive in all aspects of the fic, and that is something I value. Thanks!
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hrívë
2 things!
because you used it for sincompe to say that Sai's face had not changed? and I wonder if it'll profundis in the relationship with gaara naruto? that, apart from those things that were going around me, I gladly capitulateECIA chapter is not completely to my liking, but they are things I had to tell and give rise to the next frame. Are you writing a lemon? jojojo me know when you upload * __ * you have not read any cute xD Thanks for understanding me and being patient with me. We all have a life behind the pantaya to attend, and although I love to write every day I can not, between work and my duties I can not. After all this is only a hobby. Not that Sasuke does not want to be with him, is a bit more complicated than that. Because I really do want to be alone with Naruto, but the circularnstancias of his environment (his father in particular) do not permit. We'll see how it reacts when you talk to the blonde ... More crazy that you and I together? they already have to be very very very crazy xD For those looking forward to the two boards are an explosive convinación, nee! Kisses beautiful!
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Zarama-sama
18/05/2009. chapter 11
Answer: That
try, write every day a little bit in my spare time pagio, and that they were classmates ^ ^, was very nice touch. Sai saw a little possessive of what to expect, but wow Naruto, so firm in its refusal ^ ^ very cute, and hopefully also uses this strength to not consent to being used by the fool Sasuke. 18/05/2009. chapter 11
I counted the seconds waiting impatiently updated daily. Of all the surveys that I never imagined that I considered a friend of Naruto Shikamaru would perhaps have been better that than Sakura had to face the truth so drastically. Now, it seems that every time Sasuke gets narrower in the way of the elections while the truth is responsible for giving the slapping, I think that the famous carta Naruto had mentioned earlier of its findings is now found Sasuke, which would change the situation now judging by the last thing you put on Sasuke and his reaction to the contents of the famous letter .
Now, Naruto was already aware of the limitations of their relationship, but went on, of course all the love that influences both classically leaves us blind (temporarily) to what is happening around, and Shikamaru just as it is has come to give the tossed it to failure. As I've said in your previous review all or nothing, it is possible that if all of whether you get the crumbs while reminiscent of a secret feelingsage such people do exist and, worse, are the most abundant, with clear levels but there are plenty. Now picture this curious truth behind Jiraiya, Shikamaru the conciliator, Fugaku the wicked, the selfless Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto in the undecided middle of everything. That reminds me of good old novels.
certainly could not avoid reading the consistent line which states the stormy and pleasurable pain which is suffered Sasuke, and that's one reason why I love it! This is because in previous comments, not only of this fic, I mentioned that I am unable to see Naruto as a Uke pussy, just towards Sasuke, but your my quErida girl doing magic and give everyone their place without denigrating their character and feature as characters. From my point of view I feel that these two intense nights together would be to find out who and where, of course at that point the idea that one subject to another is more than relegated. But as they've done so far I love that you make use of things there that really happen in life, a person suddenly comes into your life, it does get much on it in such wise that you do things you never thought , this one would do (your server for example, but I never ever thought I would "stuff" in school m & aaceacción Sasuke is clear that it contains nothing good, or maybe, depending how you look. But I think she will understand many of the actions of each character, and the evil intentions of others. In the following I will try to explain little by little without overloading.
Yes that's true, Naruto was already aware of the limitations of being a lover, and accepted. One of the drawbacks of being in love, you're not able to see things objectively and think before your heart than your head. But I could not keep pace with the crumbs, not fair for him to love a person who can not surrender completely. In the long run as it says Shikamaru, would suffer. And the more time went on, the worse would be the fall. Not only is Sasuke choose one of two ways, there are more things around to prevent him from making what he craves. And now with the letter worse. It is immoral for fun, let's say you hide behind that appearance with the intent to protect the people who matter. But away is not always the best way to protect. thought is what this whole thing, still have people like Fugaku, that subject their children at will, either for your interest rid of them with the firm idea that they are a burden to maintain (especially women) and it is despicable to what you can not fightr, only the person affected can whenever you want to fight. What's worse is that many go through the hoop so as not desonrar his family. But what the family chooses not right for a child's future? I will not end ever understand. That song annoys me because someone close to me has been, fortunately bowed to the whims of his father. Ahh no, this time I can say that the chapter was short, that exceed the word limit in the previous xD I try to find that balance, but if I'm honest sometimes I lose the north, and when I realize I've written something completely different to my initial thought. I've always said, the plotTMLXC No god, thank you for reading my follow, cheering and commenting on the chapters. You'll always be grateful because they spend part of your valuable time to write me a comment with your opinion comprehensive in all aspects of the fic, and that is something I value. Thanks!
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hrívë
05/18/2009. chapter 11
2 things!
because you used it for sincompe to say that Sai's face had not changed? and I wonder if it'll profundis in the relationship with gaara naruto? that, apart from those things that were going around me, I gladly capitulateECIA chapter is not completely to my liking, but they are things I had to tell and give rise to the next frame. Are you writing a lemon? jojojo me know when you upload * __ * you have not read any cute xD Thanks for understanding me and being patient with me. We all have a life behind the pantaya to attend, and although I love to write every day I can not, between work and my duties I can not. After all this is only a hobby. Not that Sasuke does not want to be with him, is a bit more complicated than that. Because I really do want to be alone with Naruto, but the circularnstancias of his environment (his father in particular) do not permit. We'll see how it reacts when you talk to the blonde ... More crazy that you and I together? they already have to be very very very crazy xD For those looking forward to the two boards are an explosive convinación, nee! Kisses beautiful!
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Zarama-sama
18/05/2009. chapter 11
porfa Continual is early and I was hooked by that every time it getting better ha! that emotion ...
And Sakura? If so suspicious is Sasuke (q even has hired two detectives will monitor different q), q would not it be better respected a little more about herself and cut off with him? Q I understand there are situations (and people) to the q that would be impossible, but I think Sakura a character with enough character to be able to deal with it. Maybe not the 1 st (q should not forget this love) but by now, should alreadyhave faced on the face and not to detectives ... Or maybe look for a q test him out of doubt and to break with him without remorse? In short, not ... I look forward to the next chapter ^ ^ JA ne ...
, well insulated that you liked the capital, to me bad taste left by all the events, but it was something I needed to tell. Yes, it is stressed yes, poor Sasuke will create an ulcer and follow this step xDD Do not worry, the contents of the letter was not going to do to pray, in the next chapter title and everything begins to reel. You're right about Sakura is not aa girl to give in so easily, unless you have any questions with the guy who is getting married. But let's say that love is blind and does not want to mess up and inconvenience Sasuke asking directly, "You're cheating with someone else? that could irreversibly break the relationship between them, remember the pride Uchiha ... In addition, that for her are only guesses. Not that I have tried talking to him is that Sasuke is closed band and gives all kinds of excuses. The last resort was to recruit third parties. No, definitely not looking for an excuse to break with him, at least, not now xDDD Give it time, she alsocute, may not, right now the balance is tilted toward one side than another, but do not have to wait long, and the next meet again. Love, try not to take a long, nee! Besukiis!
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05/19/2009. chapter 11 have killed me, talk with Shikamaru certainly made me think of many possibilities of what you can do about Sasuke Naruto, and even more the letter that I really found Sasuke has left stranded in a final chapter quite spicy, so now threatens you with death, but simply tell you how much I'll take you cookiehours) I get up in a bad mood xD is an unhealthy habit (literally) I have with the chocolate and cookies. That kind of you to think of me for pushing me to write xDD I'll remember, I should make me your enemy pretty ^ ^ xDD Besos.
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05/20/2009. chapter 11
Hn ... the truth did not expect it to tell Shikamaru Sakura, but that did not have a ... I had not joined their ideas and thought that Naruto and could be known. Well, it's time to get off the cloud and decided to do something with his life, xD, that however much they insist on not being the main course for anyone that's what this templedo about Sasuke, so anything that relieves a bit of thought the bastard however badly this will go to sit down.
As for the letter ... Bitch, you could have put something about it. Nah, I'm hoping that Itachi has not tapped. Finally, a kiss!
Answer:
was an ace in the hole that I had, when everyone thinks something will happen and I'll turn the tables, if I'm a troublemaker frame. From the beginning I thought that Naruto, based on its character, would not be able to discern what is right and what is wrong after it had been Sasuke emotionally engaged, so they needed someone to make him see
Hello ... well I really liked this episode although it was half triston not, is it because they were not? XDXD ... whatever I think is the reason Shikamaru (sasuke love), but I agree with him is a coward hopefully end now that what the letter tell Itachi?, That's something that intrigues me too, I hope you know soon ...
greetings ...
Answer:
Hi Umi, yes that was triston nee? by both parties, both Naruto facing the reality of their relationship, and faced Sasuke the contents of that letter. Few things make a Uchiha mourn, the matter has to be serious then. Well, that also would not be interFiere xD What we like that are even to try again soon xD fight with then nee! Cuidate linda!
Kappuchu09
23/05/2009. chapter 11
Hello!
sorry for being unable to comment earlier. School but I suck every last drop of blood (literally OO) But definitely your fic every day, every chapter, every line you better. I'm surprised. * O *
Well,course of the plot was many things, right? First, the discovery of something and want more of Sasuke with Naruto. After growing sense that form the heart of each. And finally the "relationship" has been developed so that Naruto after a night of ... hn ... 'Joy' (osaksokaksa) accepted without even being reluctant to sasuke's lover. I have to see what sasuke initially terrified by the 'high end' (if I mean: D) made me laugh. But even then did nothing against it, in fact I loved what I asoaksokasoaksokakasoaksoa truth, not I love you *-* I must say that their relationship is excellent to seeC For a moment I thought the pink color is everything, but thank God no. *-* SasuNaru need more scenes and you should see also the last chapter sasuke with that says "choose Naruto" characters, I love to see the face of sakura *-* estabacada
That reminds me, Itachi dead? OMG, what a waste ç_ç "Well, it makes the plot of the fic and training on its head. But one thing I tell you ... Something else that has no history of Itachi? It also has something else in your relationship with Sasuke? Or am I crazy? Well, never mind. What is that I am sure that is what yourstoy agree with some things. I mean sasuke is weak in failing to declare to the world that does not want to but naruto sakura. However, I still think there is a mystery even closer, something that goes far beyond the mere appearance that the TEM dark demonstralo. Something much more serious. But you will know a few right? : DD I have to admit that this last scenario, I wanted to be present for naruto sasuke to neck, but leave things as they are @ - @ aoskaokas Well, I spoke too oo ", but that compensated for a minimum not reachedexaminations before sending x_x 'Suffice to say that history increasingly darker and I love and I can not stop reading, right? xD She is wonderful, and their other fics *-* I apologize for occasional errors in English, but I hope you understand everything, tune he could write in English was never my forte. And thanks, that seems the umpteenth time, let me translate for 8 weeks. Thank you very much! *-* I'm waiting for the next chapter. Congratulations on a wonderful fic. Kisses, **
Answer: Hi
Kappuchu, long time no read your cute, I hope that everything will continue going wellsugar, or sentimental because it's the receiver, above all he will always remain, cold, lazy and a remorseless bastard (a gem, come on) You're quite right, with their constant distrust Sakura demonstrating is that Sasuke does not believe in (but apparently seen no one would believe in it, it much less) has its reasons to keep hiring people and doing research on their own. Sure, it will come to an end and that first scene of the capital 1 happen again jojojo xD Just give me time.
Itachi's story is told in the next, do not reveal anything because I have it finished and ready to upload, the better you read it for yourself xD I hope you guste.
Kisses beautiful!
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coptesita
23/05/2009. chapter 11
ohh q q was found that sasuke!
oxo and now that Naruto will make the rubber hit the situation! "? xDD q hara sasuke??! decisions decisions lol sasuke does have q! nn good Naruko there we're reading:) congratulations on this genil fics! ja ne! cuidate mucho!
Answer:
Uff, the next chapter is loaded with many revelations, including all the questions I do xD Luckily I have it done, just needs some revisionsemonio what ... that kind of friends are the maximum. I thought the "bad" of the story would be Sakura, but apparently there are more bad bad! Oh! The above letter made an appearance ... who could say? Hopefully in the next chapter not rinse ... and I promise I will send all sorts of spells against you!
jijijiji
luck and I hope you update soon.
post: cinema very interesting things happen when you're with the right people ... OJO people! jijiji
Answer:
Ugh, that must be looked after as well, that colds are quite stressful. Bundle up and take hot things, is the best solution (or so my mother always says at the end I always end up aboveand do not review this so often, I decided to use my 10.0 rewiew character and I am here:
All your works I have marveled:
-Infidel: A bothersome but what bugs, that was fun to see a Sasuke so "innocent" and perfect ... so full of humor, definitely summarize by saying: WONDERFUL.
-Pennise: A spider in Brazil? ... Wow, I swear, I was surprised by the curious fact and killed me with laughter ... perfect lemon and GREAT. "A kilo of tomatoes please: Well acúsame ignorant and even I accuse me of" sin out of ignorance but sabíalor tomatoes * _ * and of course, I cried with laughter (hahaha, please forgive me, I always cry: by emotion, sadness, laughter ... but I always cry XD): SENSATIONAL.
-Naruto Neko: Naruko, were born to write Yaoi with this cute couple ... now thanks to your stories, I can not conceive of these cute kids with someone they ... Regarding this story, I confess resistíaa I read it because I wondered: Why Naruto is a cat? ... And wow, I cried, it was perfect and full of emotions, also excellent.
-Seme or Uke: Again, I accuse myself of & ldquobeginning and now I'm very entertained by it ...
Something that moves me is the beautiful way in supplementing the relationships of boys with a pregnancy and of course, is very fun to read for all you couples are going in these stages: GORGEOUS and congratulations also to do a story, something full of fancy dress with a touch of perfect love.
and of course, 8 weeks ...
Absolutely all surprised me, fascinated me and some even cried.
I think all you've given them a wonderful ending and I loved what you did with Naruto Neko: I moved and can not imagine, to see ItAchi and Minato Something that moves me is the beautiful way in supplementing the relationships of boys with a pregnancy and of course, is very fun to read for all you couples are going in these stages: GORGEOUS and congratulations also to do a story, something full of fancy dress with a touch of perfect love.
and of course, 8 weeks ...
Absolutely all surprised me, fascinated me and some even cried.
together ... I confess that some of the stories, I read only because of your authorship but not because I attract and always, in the first chapter I was hooked and simply not could not stop.
Naruko Naruto, I swear, I would kneel before you as long as you pursue this story , I enjoyed it a lot and when I reached the last chapter, did not know if mourn for the excited because I realized I was left ... I would Catholic provided you could keep both 8 weeks Memories ... I know you've had complications but I thought it did not harm or on to say that really stole the hearts MemoriesZon. Definitely Miss: You were born to write and thank you also have learned to enjoy Yaoi, you can still enjoy anime ... I've also learned to share such tastes with friends. For this I tell you, my friend, have fascinated but also one of my friends have also read the story and is completely amazed.
I'm totally happy and excited because they knew nothing about anime and now, thanks to your perfect fic, and even want to watch the anime and have started on it.
have been so amazed with your work to themIn turn, they have already passed the story to other friends each, respectively, and a friend are also heterosexual.
I do not know about you but I'm shocked because until now, four guys who knew nothing about anime, enjoy your wonderful fic and I cry as I do, its continuation.
I liked your story so far in the summer, plan to read your other works but as you can imagine, I recommended above all, Memories and have assured me that all read: status that makes me overflow with joy.
Naruko You see dear, you are now reading the comment of oneperson but who speaks for the fun and fascination of five, my sister, my two friends and their friends ... congratulations for writing, for your humor and wit, for your talent and for sharing with us all this.
Incidentally, we also want to say I love your humor: always manages to wrest smiles insurance, has achievedcer that all I turned to face "what?".
You were right: we all imagine what happened in the men's service after Sasuke remembered pain.
Naruko know something ... I read Yaoi for you because I like too the way they love and also plasmas with a touch of absolute passion ...
Something that moves me enough for all your work is that sex is always a result of pure love and although there have been some cases (Let's Gaara and Sai, thinks it is just a dust more, or Naruto with Itachi, he wanted to be forgotten helpacute; s of begging to leave everything in your life somehow, stable and balanced, which in turn will allow you to keep writing.
anxiously for reading Memories and 8 weeks, Oyuki (oyuki_flor). By the way, I know you have someone to help you with the spelling of your work but if I ever wanted to give me the pleasure to collaborate with you in this way, accept delighted and I'd be extremely grateful.
Answer: Oyuki Hello, I know it will be worse, because this story is the first to raise from a serious look, as you canand childhood, but I love animals, and they are hundreds, thousands of posivilidades for fics xDD (I have to learn to control that ...) But behind all that, I try to create a story that no solid basis ; it with sweat and sex, I think you can learn a lot from the stories, things that we live daily in real life. I call them, educational fics. Never give up without learning something new xD
neko Naruto's story is a simple matter. I liked the idea of creating a plot in which the protagonist was half human and half animal, and I was shuffling potential animal. Most choose the fox stories, the truth is that I have not readióny much more if you're not initiated in any way with this world. Thanks for sharing the story with your friends. And you know, if in doubt do me a big favor by being the spokesperson xD It's true that I have always tried to capture the sex scenes from a strong sentimental among the characters, because that's how I gustaríaa me. It is also true that this does not always happen, but I am a positive person, and what I want for me I also want for others (though these are fictional)
With cute, so I'd like ; aa me, everything around me worked at their own pace and allow me to follow were writingdo and releasing stress, but we both know that sometimes is a bit difficult to find that estavilidad. Even with that I do not give, you know I always come back, afternoon maso less. Many kisses, I hope you agree once the msn, I have much to comment you. Cuidate!
With cute, so I'd like ; aa me, everything around me worked at their own pace and allow me to follow were writingdo and releasing stress, but we both know that sometimes is a bit difficult to find that estavilidad. Even with that I do not give, you know I always come back, afternoon maso less. Many kisses, I hope you agree once the msn, I have much to comment you. Cuidate!
