Monday, April 13, 2009

Stanley Roberts Stainless Replacement Reviews 8 weeks - Chapter 10


Here I'm organizing the responses to the reviews of Fanfiction.


Fanfiction




If Natusky
took you rest. But the capital was rebueno so k does not matter. But do not do it again. Oh
going to be great, hehe, and my doubts and naru shika known?, So maybe you can avoid it, aunk essta interesting anyway. For fa Naruko
not delay, and remember I love k narusasu.

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Natusky Hi, sorry sky. Yes it took me this time, to see if the muses help me for the next and not take so long to upload. Apps, you always taNo insightful xD If you know or not to be read in the following. Of course, that sure would help a little bit xDD Kisses lovers, we read ^ _ *

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SySblood 2009 - 04-13. chapter 10
ah how dare you leave it there!
this geniial, fascinates me, porq sakura sasuke leaves and not adopt a child, the better, also aasha qe qe's wrong with being gay, it frustrates me, well .. poor naruto, I feel sorry, so cute qe is! Well, nimodo .. I hope to continue forward!

Answer: Really
Glad you like my story ^ ^ That's a good point that Sasuke should be raised, but as & ai this and omedeto bn cuidate!

Answer: Thank
beautiful ^ ^ you are a sun. Apps, to see if I happened to wear, and why we always look all reviews. For the next does not fail, if I knew I would do to change that u_u. Kissus!

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hijadelaluna

Fuck. I'll have to go to the movies but if I can see that show, the milk if I'm looking to buying the tickets, I love this episode, sasuke, if you really like to be down, deal with it, or at least not pout when you are kid, very good the capital, the truth is that a character kakashi always be my favorite, is the best along with ero-Senin, joe how nice, I hope to see pornto, greetings from your friend

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And I and I! especially as the show is watching these two frolicking xDD (perverted) No, I think he takes it very well, up or down, and he does not care as long as the blonde of his delusions. I believe that we all love these characters because they're just perverts that we mentally xDD No one can hate Kakashi or Jiraiya, if they are the salt of our lives. Besos linda, I'm glad you continue enjoying the story ^ ^

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UCHIHA

WOW! KOMO
ALWAYS THIS GREAT ... And that beggar
ALWAYS DRIVING YOUR SPOON KAKASHI Kekek
CHTMLXD It seems that now he is the one with the future of these two in your hand. I think so lazy that is not even going to bother to close it ... tend to go out with your client. That's another, it is that your boyfriend is gay, but the above you have been sticking with the first detective hired and also have been known thanks to you xD is the height of the horns. Poor thing, he must weigh his head a lot. Could it be that you are a viciosilla Comulsa and any risque scene makes you brrrbrrrbrrrr? xD Well, that happens to me u_u. Short-Naruko-rolls, so I'll call from now xDD I really love what is frustrating to Sasuke, if you have to be sexual, whichyes it is. Kami, give me you were! xDDD
Yes amore, see you on Friday. You will see that monkeys are going to go all kisses xDDDDD!!


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Tsunade25



Christy:
Millions and millions of congratulations and good wishes to you. You are in the morning with a sexy and beautiful type with desire to please but unable to contain his own overwhelming desire to finish holding you and kissing you hard without thinking of anything but make your own. Upon awakening to find him watching you face sheepskin half dying and give a gift you have wantedI do not find a better gift than that, so just imagine it and so do I centrifuge xDDD I'm glad you like the capital, ains if it is trusted enough that not Pillari, but the best is yet ; to come, to see if they jam me and I can bring the following prontito. xDDD me meo of laughter with you, that supermacho prone dobecrática will give much to talk about. Sky kisses, and thanks for your comments, I always cheer.

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Yukiko

Moses! ²

shoto!

see!, To shikamaru-sempai does not miss anything!
hear you plan to involve gaara?
because I dresionantes chapters has taken lately).

knew that Naruto was going to wonder about his relationship with Sasuke and I have the impression that if it continues it will be over then: (just have to keep waiting to see what will happen in genius was the way: D By the way, HAPPY BIRTHDAY:):) Hopefully you've been super, and do not get depressed by the passing years, enjoy them diaa day not to miss a beautiful moment of each, which ultimately is the fate of us all get to old folks, unfortunately D:

Well, I'm going now to see if I can return to the zero inspirationthen Kishi is also on the list, got me in suspense with the manga now!)

And your impression is correct, the situation of Naruto's look where the look will come a point where which will become untenable. And I do not want to settle for the crumbs, because he deserves everything, and if you can not have it, the better is nothing. Of course, I am sorry birthday, but I think to get to be old is an incentive. (If not before I die of an overdose of perversion) Kisses beautiful and mild as you study. Cuidate!

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ikaru

CONGRATULATIONS! 1
hope and follow publicndo your fic is very good the vdd and only ask you not leave the other k's have the memories of fis! hope (if not muxo Klara) you can update soon d at your age you should not worry you as io d k is 16 years since ... cuidate greetings and behave badly

see ...


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Ikaru Hi, thanks I'm pretty into it, but both stories to resist me my lack of inspiration. Just hope I can bring something soon and not dwell so much. But I always come back, that sure. Aps is a good tactic yours, prondré in practice, all that I ask say that 16 ^ _ * xDDD Besos

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miru

omg so soon?! Do not tell me ke and found no asd asd .. did not last anything taste XD hahaha but yeah I was saying that the two that came after they made known to me .. Who else but kakashi would be that would be harassing a poor Iruka
hahaha XDD ke oh but look cute ... sasuke is just so cute and cuddly * w * naru
but
¬ ¬ * ahem ... also not be able to bribe shikamaru with something? XD will rival any agency? Hahaha XDD con
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Unfortunately for them (and us) yes, I discovered them. It was a matter of time, and Shikamaru detectiveand strongly suggested to find something to distract me in any way possible, but as a distraction, so I started to haunt the pages but is well known to you. 2 weeks, more than 30 stories and forgiveness, but in fact all was not to my liking. As I am writing bad but someday I hope to fix that far because there is something I want to convey. On the other hand when I read it clear that's what I like and do not and believe me that giving can be here with a rant is not free. And the story as I told you caught me, interesting, new, different, etc. Which makes us perfectly ordinary things of life, the usual discontent, masks andeclarársele to draw attention where mindless moans and 300 paragraphs of "Ahh give me harder" take control of history. And that's why I also welcome all the context is there that exploit more than pleasant and gratifying is when you want to shout! Yey double helping please!. Unfortunately these cases are rare, and I say that because I take everything on the pages. Perhaps there may good things I do not call attention to anything, but I think that taking the character and insult their whole way of being is to take away the desire to keep watching this slaughter, in such wise that the single character is the name. Let

Narutoor what happens next, certainly if we look closely at Sasuke, and I'm not a psychologist, is carrying treating psychopathologies that are urgent. Absorbed in his revenge and closed to the outside world. In contrast here we have a Sasuke with his own problems, equally familiar and well worn on the responsibility of a company that can only be obtained through family. In either case do not go after what you want if not after what has been imposed and the circumstances around it, and I think at this point what he needs and is surely what will be happening in the future is open your eyes and ask yourself what you really want? Life for revenge and death, or redodiendole? I always appreciate every comment, however small. Were it not for the support of readers do not think I would have continued writing for so long. At the end I discovered in my method of writing anti-stress, and while readers will continue enjoying my wanderings, it is for me a good trade equivalent. You are quite right, many times we let ourselves be overcome by the desire to see our characters together and stirred, and say, this is a story is not real, so I want things to happen to them that I would like that happened to me, or failing that I would like to view. But that way you can llsive can still keep your stupid hateful character and not lose his masculinity for it. Sometimes I do not know if I express it in history, but that's what I try to understand. That may still be two of them, are in the position estény things happen to them happen to them. Join somewhat ninja life with a life of alternate universe. But it is as you say, I llevaríaa a character to a plot in which it was retained only the name. It is a pity, I think they can get much benefit as they are, but it costs a little point to catch them. That's the fun, the characters reveal to you in your own story xD That ofhookworm in the movies? They went overboard the view! xD kakashi is great, really a character like few others ...
"- What are you doing? Be still, some people behind, we can see.
"Sure they are also getting hand." HAHAHAHAHAHA
much reason man! Have a gift! A gift!
I think that Shikamaru and photos, everything is going to complicate ... it's time for Sakura suffer + w + ... even that just gives me "some" of penalty, anyway ... vice for yaoi and Smas strong and becomes only an obstacle to bring down ...
I really liked the chap, keep it
congratulations on your birthday and quamp; iQuest; What will!?
God, the matter is put heart and let me know ... vv vv vv

Well, first of all, CONGRATULATIONS, I hope you've gone pretty
day, of course that age is no question, that takes
in the heart, and knew the words of a sentence by Hence, we
women not take off years, only goes to
a friend ...

xD Have fun, I hope you did / saw / written all perversions and entertainment qe your mind like ...
jejejeje kisses, your fan always ... Hik Zhen


Answer: Hi
Zhen, of course, you know what I like my frs, that's a good excuse, my age is the step over to a friend xD I just hope it does not find out hehe. Kisses pretty, you're a sun.
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andie = D

OMG! almost jumped when I saw that he had personally update you xD
of my favorite writers, I read all your fics, and I do not remember if I left any reviews on them, but if you deserve it .

About this fic, there is nothing to say except it's great, really, I'm glad you keep the continuous and personalities, emotions, everything ...

I pity the little that they did the taste of those two, we see that Sakura is desperate, and it went through all the detective agencies and Kakashi ... xD .. Kakashi God, I break out laughing with him

well, just hope you're well and not delay to update ^ ^

luck! Bye

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Many thanks, that really encouraged me, especially when I was a bit listless. I try to make a coherent story and always keeping the personality of these guys, that's how I'd like to read. I do not know if I'm right or not, but if you still like I'm more than satisfied. Let's see if I getin this world but if it's true what I tell them and some of the reasons that both agreed to read to you were:

1 .- I love your story so when I have opportunity to comment on it I do ... with them ^ ^ 2 .- They trust my taste and I have talked so much about 8 weeks I finally understood what I atrevíaa ask openly: to read it ^ ^ But of course I like your chapters before issued on 10, I felt that I would go mad with impatience, but also grateful for the delay and because of that, I started reading the series of S. Meyer even if it did not remove all, my desire to read continuation & ado bad the first date * __ * and yes that is efficient Shikamaru ^ ^

truth now, dying to read what will happen in the men's service ^ ^ and know how much discovered the new detective ...

Naruko, congratulations, each bring us a new chapter, I am glad in a special way and always exceeded my expectations for the fic: thanks for everything.

Take care, good luck and encouragement in all your activities and send you an affectionate greeting, by the way, thanks for remembering my sister ... and fis, do not forget that I always wait with eager to follow reading each chapter ... has greatWe like the anime, there are other people who like cars, everyone has their preferences and all are equally respectable. As everyone does what they like with their free time.
As there, if readers take the trouble and time to write the least an author can do is thank you and answer your comments. I like to maintain contact with the reader and know what things they liked and what not. As I accept the criticism, in this world will never stop learning new things. But what makes me feel better is knowing that there are people with my same tastes (the yaoi is not something that is very typical). Ciertamente as you say, learning is a continuous cycle and do not think that way I think it has its days numbered, because it is a vain thought that it will bring more misery. Who does not want to improve? First we must overcome diaa day, if it is with good advice, because they are welcome.
not tell me! xD It sounds odd that a straight guy read yaoi, but I have known several cases in the same situation. It's something I am always delighted to know that people are open minded and unbiased. And above knows nothing about anime and manga, wow! yes I'm surprised. Thank him for me. Do not worry about the comments, knowing thatthem through you like I'm content. It is logical that they do if they are stuck in this world. Still I thank you both.
Sorry for the delay I'm having with the story, but my life has been complicated a bit because I have time to write sentences, and the few times that I have is my inspiration vanishes. But I always come back, sooner or later, just hope that I have patience. I also read a while Meyer's saga, as I was awake until the end. Yes, that above all, try to keep intact the figures is the hardest. I spend hours thinking about how each would act insituation, behavior and phrases that would say, with their pros and cons. The one I use is Sasuke costs; fríoy always so distant, concealing their true inner world, prioritizing ideas based on interest. Shikamaru would say, is very problematic xD (sometimes I kill of ambiguity that is ...) But hey, I'll keep trying it at least looks a little to the original.
really I'm glad you liked the capital, is to give you the impression it was actually shorter than everyone else. But it was necessary for the next. I have a plot ready to Shikamaru, not for nothing has the relation &XC Answer: Akari
Thanks ^ ^ I've started to write the following to see if I finish it soon. I hope you continue enjoying the details of these two guys xD Now with Shikamaru stuck in the middle. Cuidate!

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Ryuusai


Happy birthday to you! : D
understand your depression to grow uu Peter Pan syndrome is so common! But remember, it can be like James Barrie, and create our own Neverland regardless of our age. : D Enjoy the life! (I recommend the movie Finding Neverland if you have not seen it: P)
the capital! Waah, actually died with him, I loved it! Kakashi is Sasuke xD love with his delusions of revenge is a classicor!
Thank you for writing this fic! : 3
Do not die ever! xD I hope you are well

,
Adios!



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Nya! Thank you very much ^ ^ at the end between all going to do that than Peter Pan syndrome, do you also suffer? true ... is so common from the age xDD Eh, that's a good idea, do you think we could create a world with thousands of kids yaoi at our disposal? It's a nice dream. I'm glad you liking the story continues, more and more complicated to me, to see where Shikamaru leaves in your hands is the relationship of the two boys. xDD & Ikkeshand you miss a very weak and problematic for it. Hope you like the following besukiis ^ ^!



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bibi009
Congratulations! And you meet so many more better I get depressed callus ... Bonita
xD way to wake someone, ... pinch on the cheeks, giggling fool's face and maromazo who raised you. xD I want to wake people up ...
xD Seriously, I love Shikamaru, which is vague, with good ... has gone to Sakura ... but in the end has caught like Kakashi, who laugh when I read those were what they were going to get their hands on the rear of the theater like Sasu and Naru xD That thingar Naruto (and pun intended). I always thought it a serious problem of Bipolarity (someday write about it, xD) and I think you've caught, how if you try to avoid it no longer lost in darker and Naruto.

tell what else? Once again, you nailed the personalities (seriously, it's amazing) and get to Shikamaru as the second detective was the best option, I think you've chosen the ideal character. I hope read you soon:)

Many encouragement and congratulations! A kiss.


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xDD course, this awakening does not have to be too nice. Less macute, n that a snail) Kisses ^ ^ we read pretty soon.

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Forbidden! Oh, congratulations! I hope you you had a good enthusiastic veery satisfied, (: hahaha.

On the other side. Wow, my respect. Honestly, I never liked yaoi, the narusasu atraíay me stuff, but saw no specifically a fic that I liked. I saw this recommended on a forum and kept me glued to the chair from the outset.! Aw! do not know, simpemente put them in a very dramatic situation, problems and wing time with grace, but do not fall into stereotypes occ or other fics "sasuke is un sadomaoquista that only thinks about sex a pussy naruto at home waiting to be tied "jaajja, auqnue I must admit that I loved him dearly when naruto ironed shirt.! God! gave me so tenderly, is adorable.

"Sasuke gay? Please What was next? What perhaps their relationship was a cover? "One word:! Ja! Poor Sakura, with it, I'm dmit that you have put on paper very naive, maybe I missed the little girl that touch of intelligence, but what can you do? Guess the paint as in step " , Sasuke, moririría for you "xD

Overall, I liked it and you take your time for the isnpiración arrives. It will be worth, well, by the way, I tell you I liked your story. Simple, but not poor, describe what is necessary. (: Have a happy reading and happy right? Jojojo
Oh yes! And sai! I love, I try to read his lines in serious condition, how he would do, but it is impossible, jajaja, me love you give that spark.
Well, I say goodbye, but probably forgot something, x) Good luck!
atte. Forbidden Cherry


Answer: That original name as yours xD I love it. AThis super cool your fic kedando one of my favorites ... I hope you update soon ke sending you a BIG HUG
you bear much
kuidas ke estes
good bye kisses
Answer: Hi


Hitomi, Ais beautiful thank you very much> / / \u0026lt;do not worry with your comment, and I'm content. Not that I like a birthday, I feel old now, but I congratulate you with joy as I think I want to meet every day xD I just pray to Kami that perversion never avandone ninja my way (or not xD muse) Apps, I'm glad you liked the capital, now the thing makes me a little complicated with Shikamaru, who has bothimagine another man jajajajaja


On what's yaoi, I'm free, I like, but as they say ... which is original, I mean couples never attracted me yaoi fan, but I like yaoi to me and Yuki from Gravitation Suichi are awesome! They look so cute together! I also saw loveless, but that if I'm disgusted .. the rate is 20 and wants to shoot a 12 ... I am degenerate, but not so much:)

luck and I hope you update ... is becoming the hottest thing!


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do so? xD I liked the idea of making allusions to the world and the Hokage ninja, as this is an alternate universe could at least put some realI recommend it! Gozatela kisses, to see if we read soon. Cuidate!



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Kyosuke Takahashi


bno q congratulations in advance Many happy now to the point XD but thanks for not abandoning this fic but ..! Need help! I have you and other writers in my favorites and I have noticed lately that have been updated recently but I get the message in my e D: y no c pq and really wanted to know if there is any particular reason I can do to q arigatou fix it all and I hope you upload next q

capital soon

ne ja-PDTA: my email is nigthmaregothic@hotmail.es: D


Answer: As you eat
the private area, maybe the problem is when you have just selected your favorite authors, so that the page tells you in each update you colocaral author or story alert, so that you get to your email. See if you solved it ^ ^ thanks, I'll try again soon to continue, we read!

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Conociendote as I know you think you deleted the comment I had written xD Let's see if I see you on msn and comment ^ ^ kisses angie!


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ANPO


Ay Pein (God XD)! My Sasu! I discovered? What will the bitch now! (Sakura XD, sorry if I offended you, but I do not fall for anything right) I can not wait for the next lemon, just as it was getting interesting had to interrupt! (-Disgusting perverted ¬ ¬) Shuush, shuush be quiet conscience. Rest assured that I will not, from now on, to let you comment, I love you, you're great and that keep that in mind because everything I say is true XD fas do not stop writing! Although you do not think, I have total confidence ^ ^, is more out of habit XD
're a autoraza of qtime and inspiration I have no intention to stop writing about it I found my anti-stress method (which is enough xD) How will I import comments? I think all the authors we care. If not for readers who have encouraged and supported me so I do not think to continue writing regularly. They take the trouble to write in print, the least I can do is thank him. That always.
The recent NaruSasu my unhealthy addiction xD I've always liked these two, in the form SasuNaru, but I think having an open mind to any other position is always good. Because not only is Sasuke has always dominatesr, a bit of his own medicine is not bad to lose that character that is difficult. And again, Naruto is seme as extremely provocative xD Of course I know, and often with the girls inside . It is one of the best FCs I've seen of the couple. ANPO kisses, hope you like the next ^ ^ cuidate!


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Mikochan92

q jajaj but fun! great!
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Apps, thank you very much ^ ^ I hope not take much to bring the following. Besos!



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coptesita


Naruko! friend congratulations on the continent will stay genial! :) Jajajaja q me laugh that Sasuke and revenge list never changes jaajaja
xD oh and where the fics oxo stay that Shikamaru is so cool *-* xDD have q happens now we are reading in the Naruko continue next ja ne ! cuidate mucho! nn


Answer: Thanks
cute ^ ^ and no, Sasuke without his long list of revenge would not be him xD More than anything else has already taken as usual (though certainly not put them in Pra CTIC) You see, now Shikamaru is the one with the relationship of those guys in the palm of his hand, his decision will depend on you to continue or not. Kisses, and I started writing the following to see if I upload too late. Cuidate!